Instead of a reboot, it might have been… prudent… to gather feedback on why it didn’t work out. I mean, there are some oddities in your marketing scheme, like… telling your audience a significant chunk of their hard earned cash is going to pay the rent and fund other mundane things, is a bit of a let down. It may be the blatant truth, but that doesn’t really work in marketing. People invest in their perception of your potential. Your brutal honestly might pop the bubble prematurely. It’s your task to get them excited right up to the moment of pledging, maybe a few minutes longer!
The following image is meant to represent your progress over the years:
This is not convincing. We see expensive audio equipment, professional lighting, yet an extremely overlit projection screen, leaving the projected image dull and unimpressive. It’s not really engaging too, as it’s just your logo, it doesn’t represent the product, it doesn’t show potential. What do you want to express with these photos? How is your studio relevant to your supporters? Presumably they are not going to visit it, it looks like a whole lot of money was pumped into it, maybe their money will be used to spice it up… why would they care? Why bring it up?