Suggestions on HUD

I know this is kind of random, but I am making a main menu for a project that has a 80% chance of never seeing the light of the WIP forum, and I need opinions on the main menu. I am not much of an artist, and I could never afford one, so I am stuck doing graphics myself and endlessly tweaking.

Any thoughts? Tweaks? Comments?

Larger: http://i.imgur.com/GFK8HsW.png

Thanks,
CopyableCougar4