Not to be too critical ( logo design is a very personal and difficult stage of establishing an identity ), but the second one strikes me as too “marketing”. I originate from central Florida ( USA ) and that second one really does give me the feel of trying to sell a time share or retirement community investment. Sorry if that’s pretty harsh.
As mentioned above, the second one DOES have more variety to the design which helps with thinks like monochrome letter head and such. So I think it’s going in the right direction, but could just use a little more evolution.
Maybe post a message of what you’re trying to get across with the logo and that would help us interpret the delivery. There’s a big difference in how a logo is interpreted based on the message. if you’re trying to be fun and light-hearted it’s very differnt than strong and powerful. Neither are necessafily better than the other…just different messages.