New project poster

Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback on my last project poster, it contributed to a complete redesign. I am sending off the new poster to the printers on Monday so I figured I would post it here tonight in case any of you guys might catch some error that slipped by me:

http://www.saar.se/nevermore_poster.php

I welcome all comments and please point out any errors in the text. Thanks!

William

Hi William,

looks quite cool!

only criticsm I have is that the text could be better layed out. I just feel the breaking of the text horizontally seems to break the composition of the poster.

Larry

Thanks, I was mostly worried about the language. I’m not a graphic designer and doing layout is quite hard when one wants to have a lot of text that has to be 16+ points so people can read it from about 1.5 meters in an exhibition.

I added a more detailed description about the project and other projects to my site:
http://www.saar.se