my art good no?

http://s16.postimg.org/almytbrvp/SUP.png

tell me what you think =D

btw am not good with layers in the game will try to fix that for later =D

I rather like it, well done. Far better than anything I could make.

thank you =D

Very nice art. I certainly like it =)

thanks =D

It’s highly inconsistent.

Make sure everything is kept to scale, don’t just take a bunch of random sprites and draw them onto the screen at random sizes. That’s a huge turn-off for many people in pixel-art.

You seem to recognize the importance of simplicity in pixel-art, and that’s a good thing, but consistency is just as important.

  • Jev

For the most part nice job. The trees look decent.

However, the UI elements look severely out of place and squashed.

Better than my art ;D

ty =D for telling me

Your art is amazing!

Only thing that needs work is the UI element in the bottom left corner of the screen.
I’m having trouble recognizing what it is, and its color scheme (theme) and shape seems much different than the rest of the art.

But otherwise I really love the trees and flowers. Way better than anything I could ever make. :slight_smile:

thanks :3 well it the UI was made before the other am doing new sprites for that and new sprites for player
as well so it fits in with the rest =D

Trees? I thought those were mushrooms :wink:

Things to fix:

  • consistent shadows (flowers have them, mushrooms do not)
  • maybe add 2-3 different rotations for the flowers
  • grass gives out the grid. Try making 4-5 different tiles and then mix them randomly

thanks for the idea!

Looks good but maybe have a look at the size ratios.
the trees are a bit small for example.