Any way to improve my logo?

Everything you touch has instant sex appeal

A logo should be clear and simple, this one has too much clutter (lines, shadows, fonts, colors).


http://www.java-gaming.org/user-generated-content/members/70942/emberenginesimplethumb.jpg

Rayvolution did a really great job with that design. However, per 65K’s comment, I tried to imagine how a simple design would look for the Embers Engine logo above.

Yeah, in my opinion, I don’t think simple quite works for the Embers Engine design. Ray is on the right track when it comes to his art direction. It totally depends on the website, but there is a poster appeal to Ray’s design. Depending on how cluttered the website is, there is a choice to either make the logo pop out using Ray’s design. Also, you can have a lot less attention using the above design.

Either way, I suppose you have options now. :point: